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Free verse № 130073

UNTITLED

Member since 2005 · Posted 24 Aug 2005 · 1 comment

I care not of her beauty Although it be intoxicating I only desire her heart I'm sure to her this is surprising She being the one thats never felt true love While I know only the pain of that exact thing She feels an emptiness and knows not why To her life,so much happiness I could bring But I step aside in quiet haste Stunned by the realization that I'll necver her kiss Maybe it is for the best After all ignorance is bliss

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[8] bellafuego 25-Aug-05/9:49 AM Reply
"necver"?