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Member since 2005 · Posted 25 Aug 2005 · 3 comments

Once again we sit in silence After all is said and done. Only emptiness inside us, Baby, look what we've become. We can make promises, But we still won't change. It isn't right to stay together When we only bring eachother pain

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[8] Bethy 25-Aug-05/4:52 AM Reply

simply said...good poem...:)Bethy *8*

[1] bellafuego 25-Aug-05/11:33 AM Reply

i think mariah's verse is "we can make a million promises"

[2] LilMsLadyPoet 28-Aug-05/8:42 PM Reply

sorry...but it needs more meat. and...each other/ two words. And you forgot the ending period, since you used them throughout.