Free verse № 62086

Heartbroken

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Aug 2003 · 6 comments

Heartbroken Pieces of my heart Is fluttering around you You ignore it! I can't understand Why you left me crying In shame I have nobody to blame. Because of me we broke up I believed in what people told me I didn't listen to you Now we're seperated Now my heart is torn I cry because of you I don't understand Why I love you this much to cry I told my friends I didn't like you It was a lie Only a few people know About the way I feel for you I just wish You'd know Because of you I'm dating your brother Wishing you to become jelous of us I don't want you to feel hurt But how does it feel? You broke my heart Now it's you turn I'd wish to become in a relationship wish the one I love That person is...you

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6 comments

[n/a] PimpinBitch15 24-Aug-03/8:20 PM Reply

This was a long time

[n/a] PimpinBitch15 24-Aug-03/8:21 PM Reply

This was a long time ago with lost love.

[2] horus8 24-Aug-03/8:58 PM Reply

Your grasp of the male penis is deluded by the fact that you are a gicantic clitoris, but slowly dehydrating from a lull in masturbation, due to your puny women arms.

[n/a] JoyLuck 24-Aug-03/10:17 PM Reply

lolololololololololololol

i'm not glad i came back

[n/a] deleted user 24-Aug-03/10:24 PM Reply

there once was a hoppedup from frisco
who hopped each train licketysplitsgo
one day with a burst
his pipe plugged the first
now he's spreadbout from here to hankletsgo

[7] Stephen Robins 12-May-04/2:53 AM Reply

You are a snot gobbler.

In no way does this endless mass of cuntbutter deserve anything above an 8. This poem is a narcissistic mess and the imagery is some of the weakest I have ever read.