poemranker ::handshake by ay deee

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handshake

Member since 2005 · Posted 10 Sep 2005 · 0 comments

man you've got a strong grip shake once fierce but friendly a brief glance you and me we made a pact we'll see if we're best friends but for now i know your name and your home town an acquaintance to be sure a co-worker bloke, dude whad you do yesterday? seen any action? i'm goin to moe's the one around the corner from the grocery for a beer later whaddaya say? man, i say this place it's like a damn smelly ass garbage incinerator can i borrow your hammer drill? thanks preciate it what's your name again? i 'm no good with names man well... its gettin on that time i got my folks waitin see yall tmorrow

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