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Broken Free (Free verse) by TLRufener
When I cried out In my time of need You were nowhere to be found. When I was lost, You let me wander. When my heart broke, You let the pieces scatter. Into the wind Flew my hopes and dreams; Where were you? When I began to go astray You just let me go. I never felt your love. I never saw your shining star. What happened To ‘love for all’? If you truly love me Why did you let me leave? No longer do I need your light; I have found my own way. I am my own; I am me; I don’t need you. I only need my own beliefs. What I have been told Is not for me; I rule my thoughts Because I have broken free.

Up the ladder: server maintenance
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8766
Posted: September 10, 2005 6:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2005 6:08 PM PDT
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