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The Death of an Octopus

Member since 2005 · Posted 16 Sep 2005 · Edited 16 Sep 2005 · 4 comments

octopus eyeballs pressed to the tank-- a raised bat

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[10] ay deee 16-Sep-05/9:34 AM Reply
truly great sentiment
[n/a] tianyi › ay deee 16-Sep-05/9:40 AM Reply
Thanks, im working on a Villanelle in a similar vein.
[n/a] tianyi › tianyi 16-Sep-05/7:32 PM Reply
The Villanelle's done if you're interested.
[6] Tintagiles 25-Sep-05/8:54 PM Reply
The Villanelle's much better.