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I thought we were meant to be

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

Out of every grain of sand Out of every fish in the sea You were the only one who was meant for me You said you loved me, I said it too How should I have known that the me was a he My heart was crushed my eyes were wet If I were to paint a picture it???d be the best silhouette I felt like a feather just sifting through the air Oh my life with out you is just so bare You tell me to get over it and I hold in my tears I can???t handle this mess for another hundred more years The woman I thought you were was all just a hoax The tears in my eyes have started to shine The love I had for you was just a waste of time ~Trevor Greene

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Sep-02/8:41 PM Reply
When I read this poeme, I wanted to clap. But instead I tugged into a bap. And while you may avert your eyes, you'll not taste finer than my Bap Surprise.