poemranker ::You, Me and that night by BrAnDiLoVesYoU

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You, Me and that night

Member since 2005 · Posted 13 Oct 2005 · 0 comments

You say yes, and i agreed but what went wrong? fun, laughs and everything around us was a memory keeping close we danced through the night stars looking down, and the dark gray clouds hover above us, like guardians it ended with a special gift, it reached out and wrapped my arms but it came cold and shivers ran throughtout Best night for you and me Then you saw her, a girl who stole your sole My heart torn, in two disgusted to know your with her After greatness happened, and arrived but i guess thats not enough tears of sadness roll down slowly, like a stream of rushing water Nothing can help, nothing at all, no pain will ease only the vision of u, me and that night you are now disappeared into the white light where u must stay for life.

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