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GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION

by iowajerms

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Aug 2008 · Edited 6 Aug 2008 · 4 comments

GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION No matter if it's tall or short, No matter if it's heavy or light, No matter if it's fat or skinny, No matter if it's dull or bright, I think God's most wonderful creation Would have to be the waterfall, Because it always seem to become, Something that could be beautiful.

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4 comments

[n/a] Blindpoetry 7-Aug-08/12:33 PM Reply
YOUR NEXT POEM SHOULD BE ABOUT CAPS LOCK

change dull to dim and we'll talk.
[3] Dovina 14-Aug-08/3:52 PM Reply
get real!
[0] SupremeDreamer › Dovina 5-Sep-08/7:14 PM Reply
You really must not spare the rod. Thou shall fortify thy spine if thou wisheth to bestow examens of anothers' meager pennings.
[0] SupremeDreamer 5-Sep-08/7:23 PM Reply
No. This is not your local Church choir, this is not Hallmarks Superlative Christians' Division.

This is the Ranker:- A mighty kingdom where the most ruthless of warrior poets reside and conduct the ritual of courtly battle. Your "poem" is a disgrace to our proud temple of literature. So I say:

"BEGONE FROM THIS MIGHTY KINGDOM, AND DO NOT DARE PRESENT YOUR LOWLY SPECTRE BEFORE OUR MIGHTY EYES EVER AGAIN!"