Aurora

by Aetius

Member since 2004 · Posted 15 Nov 2005 · 6 comments

Brazenly her wares are displayed on the corner Nameless red flower

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A favorite of nentwined.

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[10] nentwined 15-Nov-05/9:46 PM Reply

I liked this a lot. I couldn't decide how simple or deep it was supposed to be, and my head flipflopped between ideas. decided on simple and deep. ;)

[n/a] ALChemy 16-Nov-05/7:40 AM Reply

Good one.

Did you know that your list of poems in your homepage form the acrostic "ASS. U C IT?

[n/a] Aetius › ALChemy 16-Nov-05/9:10 AM Reply

Hadn't noticed. You should see what the Sonnet I wrote spells out!

[n/a] ALChemy › Aetius 16-Nov-05/10:25 AM Reply

I could if you'd post it.

[n/a] <~> 16-Nov-05/10:52 AM Reply

nice one.

[7] Dovina 16-Nov-05/8:06 PM Reply

I see no point in shrouding a thing like this. In allowing several ingterpretations, you do what I do, and incur the consternation of me. maybe you meant something particuar, maybe nebulosity. It seems to me that a poem should at least purport something, not paint lines pointing in all directions. It's ok if readers find other meanings, but some meaning should stand our like a basket of fruit or a tree.