poemranker ::do i know you? by daggatolar

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Free verse № 136469

do i know you?

by daggatolar

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

do i know you? a face is a lie to another face we only forget to run the memory away we become mad and faces on thier own unrecognise us

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[7] Dovina 8-Jan-06/3:53 PM Reply
This is good except for Line 2, which can go, I think.
[6] zodiac 8-Jan-06/8:32 PM Reply
their. Good one.
[9] cyan9 9-Jan-06/6:28 AM Reply
This looks and even sounds like it has a meaning or is expressing something, in fact on 2nd read I think I got it. Like the unrecognizing part, in fact its growing on me, especially now the title. As a poem it is not too hot, but it stimulates and has drawn me in and conjured images and thoughts much more than most poems.