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eclipse (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
if you are encompassed by darkness
i will tell you about the sun
you are here, no escape
from the actions you have done
you will cry all alone
but it does not mean a thing to me
knowing the song i will sing
you wade in a pool of despair
come to me, i will repeat my tune
it's tragic to watch a thing so fair
screaming and shedding crimson tears
my words do not mean a thing to you
i hope you see the sun
someday, after the darkness
but you can never see the sun
ever in the darkness
it does not much matter to me
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6698
Posted: September 28, 2003 1:07 AM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2003 1:07 AM PDT
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