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more of the same (Free verse) by calliope my form suits the forum
and i suit myself
in the finest of thriftstore-soiled
cottons and silk.
and i am alive,
well, i think so, at least.
because the calendar climbs down
a line like those seams.
and i shoot out my words
in a myriad storm
in the hopes that the forum
might forgive my form.
Up the ladder:
peanut butter sandwiches on a hot summer day
Down the ladder:
Money Back
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Posted: January 29, 2006 11:19 PM PST; Last modified: January 29, 2006 11:19 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7946 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.104
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30-Jan-06/12:43 PM
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And, speaking for the forum, we do forgive - forgive "a myriad" when myriad would do, forgive that you mean "myriad words." But I lit this, the thought of it.
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.104
> Dovina
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31-Jan-06/11:38 AM
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Sorry, I mean, "I like this . . ."
I liked this...just like it is.
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