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the true path of love

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Mar 2004 · 0 comments

lovers weave a path that is golden simple lies and kisses hold them their bonds seem saintly so they move to tomorrow this is the beginning of sweet sorrow a path of barren destiny where the show is there for all to see sense their deepest desires thus now and as they build their empires is this for the best god sends thus a test be true to ones own or be in henyas overtones feel this first and your lover wont become your worst

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