poemranker ::run'em'hard by grendal

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Free verse № 138543

run'em'hard

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Feb 2006 · 3 comments

star light star bright i see you till suns in sight i wish i may i wish i might to not see stars till sun light. I AM A SALTON kiss the ring smell the the flower the alure intranses my inner power. i want to be your friend introduce to my friend i see you need me to lend] a hand. SALTON I AM dabble you do dable you will now i have you in my chill. in my reach you can not breach you are as salted as a beach. can you control on you atoll? i think you can I AM A SALTON and when you decide to come down i will shelter safe and sound SALTON AM I? YES I AM now open your hand here is some sand no need for money just lending a hand. you look good great, you are late omn your payment for me to rake.

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[n/a] Ranger 9-Feb-06/6:32 AM Reply
Stanza 4 = necromancy? Not sure I get this one but I'm a bit slow, so don't worry. Say hi to horus wherever he is.
[5] wilco 9-Feb-06/3:24 PM Reply
It's like a retarded Dr. Seuss poem...no offense to you...It just doesn't make any sense.
[n/a] grendal › wilco 16-Feb-06/3:31 PM Reply
your like Dr.Seuss himself . . . so you should be dead