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Summer Vacation

by weeb

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 6 comments

I asked her where she wanted to go this year. She said, "I just don't want to see another phallic monument dedicated to the industry of man." So we went to the Grand Canyon.

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6 comments

[9] anonymous 10-May-02/5:37 PM Reply
Woo!
[6] nentwined 12-May-02/8:17 PM Reply
this is hilarious. :)
[8] hoopoe 19-May-02/3:31 AM Reply
Lovely,

makes me laugh.

the art of just how much to say and how to put it together; you stay on the tightrope and the result is a smile that goes on...
[10] deleted user 12-Jul-02/8:39 AM Reply
LOVED this! Elegant, wry humor, complicated, resonant
[7] Blake 12-Jul-02/11:18 AM Reply
A very modern epigram,
But moreso joke than poem;
A guy who couldn't give a *care*
Will find himself at home.
[0] deleted user 12-Jul-02/3:58 PM Reply
Why is this a poem? Its a stand-up punch line.