Likeness

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Mar 2006 · 2 comments

Around here the people have your eyes And your deathly glare And they all look at me Through me I'm sure of it I walk the streets with a downcast smile Let your hands reach for me And abhor your pretty fingers I wish you were--

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[8] Ranger 18-Mar-06/5:06 AM Reply

'Tis the season to be jolly...oh, wait.
Good ending!

[8] ElmoBeavisButthead 19-Mar-06/5:19 AM Reply

The poem was short but nice. The title I think should be renamed though..Other than that good job.