poemranker ::scenestealer by crin

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Free verse № 72076

scenestealer

Member since 2001 · Posted 25 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

i hope you come soon because this temptation is growing i hope to hear from you soon i admit i'm feeling nervous i'm sitting here waiting for collisions and near misses all i need are your hands all i need is for you to come kick the door in there's a symphony playing underneath the dialogue of this scene all my plans have been made now i'm just waiting to see if you'll hit your mark at center stage

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[5] baphomet 26-Oct-03/7:11 PM Reply
Hmmm:? okay thats enough, it's very . . . well
use your imagination. enough said cheereyo
lllll. . .