poemranker ::a goodbye fish by calliope

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a goodbye fish

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Mar 2006 · 0 comments

You paint my shoe a bright bright blue. I kick it through the glass. Must get to you. I smash into aquariums. I dive into terrariums from far above. Your necklace-green, My shoe-your love. And like that shoe you smash right through a haunted overpass.

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