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The lasts of Joe

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Nov 2003 · Edited 19 Nov 2003 · 7 comments

Damn all this You dont know How good it felt When you held me In your arms I feel lost now that you are gone My eyes shut tightly I try to hide away It still hurts I love you jmv

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[5] horus8 8-Nov-03/3:09 PM Reply

Quit sniffling! What kind of satanist are you? How can you be proper and evil wearing that cockerspaniel hat and a pink tutu?

[4] SupremeDreamer › horus8 8-Nov-03/4:24 PM Reply

A girlie gave him a lil hug'n'kiss, and he found out that he wasnt evil, just seriously loaded on the 120 proof Denial&Sour-Grape Vermouth.

Some gremlins still have a fur coat in their secret closet.

[4] SupremeDreamer 8-Nov-03/4:26 PM Reply

Hide? Grow nut hair and give her a kiss already.

Blessed with 4.

[n/a] electroman1979 19-Nov-03/8:30 PM Reply

how is it that you can put on seven poems in a row and everyone else can only put three on a week?

[8] ShaNoN+960317485 › electroman1979 19-Nov-03/10:16 PM Reply

Satan & his ilk has special pass u know:o)

[8] ShaNoN+960317485 19-Nov-03/10:22 PM Reply

i love u 2 man:o)

[8] Shuushin 20-Nov-03/8:57 AM Reply

This is desperate frustration pleasantly and simply delivered - I'm tempted to not like that it might be *too* simple - but it works. how in god's name did you put seven poems up? -8-