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terrorism and break dancing

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Sep 2002 · 6 comments

i spin sometimes sometimes i spin too much soft to the touch of a trigger go figure. These humans, they bore me but also adore me I guess you could say in an innocent way There was a summer I learned to like beer not here its all blather so says marshall mather bitch which reminds me, and blinds me and somehow confines me I made a voodoo doll and called it satan.

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6 comments

[5] Dark Angle 11-Sep-02/12:33 AM Reply
nice poem... i suppose. i like the eminem mention, hes funny, but his last name is mathers
[8] horus8 › Dark Angle 11-Sep-02/2:05 AM Reply
i like gregory mathers. cads. nice poem!
[4] nentwined 17-Dec-02/11:11 AM Reply
I liked it up until "there was a summer I learned to like beer" -- that threw me off of the rhythm I'd build up, and... dunno, randomized everything else to dust.
[8] horus8 20-Dec-02/1:58 PM Reply
kool.atleast it's not t.s eliot. is it? merry christmas and all that other arm funk.
[8] -=SeTTle=- 4-Jan-03/10:20 PM Reply
TIE ME DOWN
[3] RGallet 7-Jan-03/7:59 PM Reply
pretty boring, the title got my hopes up.