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Free verse № 143045

The Observatory

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2006 · Edited 11 May 2006 · 1 comment

Rifling through thoughts to find the flaw Is it me who stands between us? Or are we standing close eyes closed, holding hands, feeling not each other but skin?

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[8] Ranger 11-May-06/1:44 PM Reply
This is good, thoughtful and plenty of alliteration.