poemranker ::With a pithy stroke by D. $ Fontera

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Haiku № 143194

With a pithy stroke

Member since 2004 · Posted 15 May 2006 · 2 comments

Chamberlain comes Death, On the stair in robes, lamplight. My pen, still: hand paused.

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[2] Edna Sweetlove 15-May-06/4:38 PM Reply
This is bollocks. Your others are better (I hope)
[6] Dovina 15-May-06/7:32 PM Reply
The last line seems to say the same thing twice, which, in a haiku, is far too many.