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Free verse № 114392

My Last Thought

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Oct 2004 · 2 comments

I think of you, As the silver bullet, Jolts quickly through, My head, You realize, That you never listened, And you never cared, I tried to tell you, How I felt, But you never heard, It's too late now, You can't go back, And un-do what has, Already been done, You know, You should have listened, But now I am gone, And nothing, Can be done.

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[7] oneglove 30-Oct-04/11:33 PM Reply
the punctiation is kind of annoying and breaks the poem up in a weird way
[1] Edna Sweetlove 13-Aug-06/5:54 PM Reply
Badly punctuated garbage. Why not get educated?