poemranker ::What if... by DMonster

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Free verse № 79126

What if...

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

Darkness takes over Time is coming to an end We will all die eventually Weather it be painful, peaceful, or self-conducted We all have our own time to die I choose to make mine now With the gun in my hand One bullet its loaded I put it against my head and pull the trigger, the bullet is lodged into my head As I lay here with blood all around me I think of the people who finally got what they wanted And in these last moment I think...What if... Time is coming to an end Darkness takes over

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[1] <{Baba^Yaga}> 11-Jan-04/12:11 PM Reply
A centiturd.