poemranker ::turn back time by pollywolly

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Free verse № 144724

turn back time

by pollywolly

Member since 2006 · Posted 22 Jul 2006 · 1 comment

skipping through the sand made road scuffed toes skipping through the puddles formed there running faster to get where?

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[6] ecargo 25-Jul-06/10:06 AM Reply
I like the idea, but it needs more. Such a spare poem, too, can't really support repetition of words unless it serves a purpose (i.e., "skipping"). Expand this--bring us along with you.