poemranker ::The First One by Aurthur Unknowen

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Free verse № 122503

The First One

Member since 2005 · Posted 26 Mar 2005 · 0 comments

To whom controls my dismay please release me from this neck tight hold in this I am a mortal my energy frazzled inside my head I m dazzled by the forces you hold please let me explain for I feel Iam sane I have a soul familier with pain I believe my limit has been met I leel this is enough and that you must lighten up

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