poemranker ::Life Addict by Enkidu

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Free verse № 144918

Life Addict

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Aug 2006 · 1 comment

I wake up and I need it, bad. It's got my system hooked. From sunrise to sunset I crave it. I've tried meetings, interventions, giving it up cold; suicide. Each moment's worse than each previous and I'm torn. I can't sleep. I need it in me. Every dollar I spend feeds this- my addiction. Coffee, concert tickets, Coca-Cola, bus rides and airfare get me by, to that place I need to be. It's wonderful when it hits you. But I need more: a job, hardcore stuff. Greeting cards and magazines. I need family and friends. Sure, my addiction is real and I'll feed it 'til the day I die.

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[7] Dovina 1-Aug-06/1:35 PM Reply
Are you a poetry junkie?