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Digital Remembery

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 3 comments

capturing the transient in spinning light, the ones and zeroes of quantum meaning, capturing the fleeting flute of her voice on my spinning plastic disc. 9-9-01 JV

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[9] roses are read 6-Apr-02/8:38 PM Reply

hhmmm...i like this a lot a lot! you have a very interesting concept going on. could i suggest a change in line breaks though? maybe try this:
capturing the transient in
spinning light,
the ones and zeroes
of quantum meaning,
capturing the fleeting flute
of her voice on my
spinning
plastic
disc.

[6] nentwined 9-Jul-02/4:24 PM Reply

hmm. ones and zeros are sort of the opposite of quantum, so far as I understand things. quantum is beyond fuzzy. beyond that, though, this is rather nice. :)

[8] x311 8-Aug-02/7:42 AM Reply

interesting look at the "art" of music in today's digitality. Makes you wonder about everything that's gone digital today. Has it lost feeling because it's all 1's and 0's now. You've struck my curiosity.