i spin you like a top

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 1 comment

i spin you like a top from your towel the beach is empty the sky can cover us while we lie together my back in the hot sand i'll hide in your shadow the taste of the sea already fills our mouths let it drip from your body warm upon my stomach racing the slow draw and crash of the surf

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[9] poetandknowit 6-Sep-02/10:46 AM Reply

Excellent poem. Check this one out Beaker. A young and sober Bukowski. Influences showing right through, eh? What a first image.