Luicidity

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 3 comments

I won't stick to you like glue I'll just hinder and never surrender I'll drift by you like smoke that curls around your damn beautiful face like the catch in your throat. -- I'll grace you with my presence while you inhale my essence and then deeply exhale me when you have soaked up all my salty sugary poisons I'll pollute your body and inhibit your mind killing you slowly softly -- Each time you take a long hard drag I won't be far away

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[9] nentwined 5-Jul-02/10:20 AM Reply

beautiful. =)

[6] FreeFormFixation 9-Oct-03/9:49 PM Reply

smoking is fun! but seriously, i enjoyed this. smoke is a wonderful device to describe fluidity and infiltration.

[5] deleted user 24-Jul-04/7:50 PM Reply

are you a cigarette?
ah, well, you almost tricked me.