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Hallelujah

Member since 2007 · Posted 10 Mar 2007 · 5 comments

i held her close, i held her tight i held her in the trembling candlelight i broke through her feigned defences her halfhearted virtuous fight her perfume it soaked my senses some cheap exotic delight hallelujah i barely knew her through the satin sheets she tore i embraced her every subtle flaw my hand moved across her shoulder her peignor fell to the floor i promised i'd forever hold her my lover, my redeemer, my whore hallelujah i barely knew her to her sanctum sanctorum i stole where she hid both diamond and coal i stripped her down, made her devils bare but they only held a minor role i listened to her silent prayer and i read her sacred scroll hallelujah i barely knew her

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5 comments

[n/a] Ranger 10-Mar-07/9:31 AM Reply
You must know, surely, that any appreciator of Cohen (or, more likely, Buckley) will not be able to bring themself to accept this.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-Mar-07/11:11 AM Reply
An emergency spaz that doubles as a handyman's tortoise auditorium.
[n/a] Stephen Robins › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Mar-07/9:59 AM Reply
A tremendously smelly vicar egg
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Stephen Robins 14-Mar-07/4:08 PM Reply
A foetus-mounted lacquered tramp beard supplied with a sausage extractor.
[n/a] Stephen Robins › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Mar-07/1:45 AM Reply
A suprisingly brittle coat of vicar discharge