poemranker ::The Invisible by Skamper

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Free verse № 151509

The Invisible

Member since 2007 · Posted 17 Apr 2007 · 0 comments

you look beautiful passion painted – sweat drenched from the darkness of the sheets - it took 6 days 14 hours and 23 minutes for you to see I coloured my hair - because I told you the back of your head never changes except when I cut it noticeable and taken note - I find knives a fascination even up the score - the duality of blades I could just leave - but my lips can’t leave the floor

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