poemranker ::Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar

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Free verse № 151698

Lustlets of longing

Member since 2006 · Posted 29 Apr 2007 · 2 comments

Little spurting stress busters, leaking tributaries without a source- ride up up up the tip of craving, carve courses down carnal valley- water sports, wet weather reports, tie ups in dungeons and forts. Thus desire dribbles on paper. He crumples the now limp appendage, back inside his lonely pyjamas.

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[7] half.italian 5-May-07/11:18 AM Reply
Delicious.
[6] pete 7-May-07/4:32 PM Reply
the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)