poemranker ::bitch! by Freethinker1602

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Free verse № 71432

bitch!

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Oct 2003 · 2 comments

I want to kiss him so hard it'd make his knees weak I want him to colapse beneath my passion I want to make him take everything I give him no matter how rough it is I want him begging for me to go on I want him begging for me to stop I want him to beg for more I'll give him what he begs for I want his body at my mercy I want to give him a night never to be forgotten A night where he is my bitch

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[n/a] poetandknowit 21-Oct-03/7:21 PM Reply
Is this a poem or simply a collection of statements with a tag line at the end? I need to know.
[7] kingit 22-Oct-03/10:06 PM Reply
go getem' bigboy!