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bitch! (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 I want to kiss him so hard it'd make his knees weak
I want him to colapse beneath my passion
I want to make him take everything
I give him no matter how rough it is
I want him begging for me to go on
I want him begging for me to stop
I want him to beg for more
I'll give him what he begs for
I want his body at my mercy
I want to give him a night never to be forgotten
A night where he is my bitch
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Celestial Veil
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Posted: October 21, 2003 7:12 PM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2003 7:12 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6348 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.129
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21-Oct-03/7:21 PM
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Is this a poem or simply a collection of statements with a tag line at the end? I need to know.
go getem' bigboy!
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