poemranker ::Smoke Me by Skamper

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Free verse № 151842

Smoke Me

Member since 2007 · Posted 17 May 2007 · 0 comments

the notes written in chalk fade fast colours flash when wet- waiting on the rain to cry words from bleeding eyes hidden nightmare’s waves of fear race against the blooded veins shaking indecision cuts nicely nerve endings cracked and bloated breath slow - the rush over ask me – what happened it’s written in the chalk I can’t read or remember - the paranoia does She’s the one – hiding dusted fingers crossed behind her back

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