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Free verse № 88920

The feeling

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

I want you to know that I love you so. And if you think you´ll find a deeper love, then I think you´re wrong. If you want to know why, why I´m feeling so high. Cause every time you look at me, I feel so heavenly. My body is aching, shaking, It feels like I´m breaking. It´s only because, I love you so much. My heart is beating, and my head is spinning. It feels like it´s the lottery I´m winning. I want to dance, I want to fly. I want to fly high up in the sky. I want to scream, to see if it´s only a dream. I love you so much, Oh heavenly touch. My dream came true, and it´s all because of you!

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[n/a] lastobelus 16-Feb-04/3:36 PM Reply
This love, it vibrates?
[n/a] deleted user 17-Feb-04/2:46 PM Reply
How hollow is thine head? Sweetmeats und bread.