poemranker ::Bonded by Skamper

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Free verse № 152469

Bonded

Member since 2007 · Posted 14 Jun 2007 · 9 comments

Silk - tell me a story blooded and gory of man's foolish ways and how you managed to create even participate in such thunder He rolled up a number his eyes flashed beneath the flare I crashed fell at his feet he lit up the smoke drew my face in the haze my story I told… he seemed pleased raised me to my knees Gave me the smoke - Shotgun stretched out on his throne to me alone he called I felt the love his cold hands clutching silken strands that moved rhythmically in his lap He sighed... Welcome back

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9 comments

[8] pete 14-Jun-07/5:46 PM Reply
wow...lol...catcha later
[9] Dovina 15-Jun-07/8:35 AM Reply
Something like the comfort in my recent one. Nice job.
[n/a] Skamper 16-Jun-07/10:40 AM Reply
wow guys - your comments are weirdly comforting. thanks :)
[8] drnick 17-Jun-07/6:59 PM Reply
Dark and erotic, like your mother.
[n/a] Skamper › drnick 19-Jun-07/2:07 AM Reply
lol - NICE!
[8] lmp 18-Jun-07/7:37 AM Reply
if this is really as erotic as it sounds... seems like a scene out of some "master - servant" relationship. a little oral pleasure as a welcome back?

not sure what the narrator's "story" is really...
[n/a] Skamper › lmp 19-Jun-07/2:05 AM Reply
can't get any closer than satan and his maiden...just checking in
[8] lmp › Skamper 28-Jun-07/4:04 PM Reply
checking in?
[n/a] Skamper › lmp 3-Jul-07/7:26 PM Reply
I'm his maiden - I check in now and then, make reports, receive new assignments and tend to needs...