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Underneath This Burning Sun

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jul 2007 · 0 comments

I got to get something of my chest I'm a soldier and I just want to be the best Right now I can't let anyone get in my way From getting to be that one day I got feelings for this girl who I terribly miss I'd seriously give your life for her kiss Even if I thought it could work right now I'd have to say sorry but we'd slow eachother down Two lives heading in different directions I can only hope we share some intersections Just to see you a visit every now and again I hate the idea of it we got to seattle being friends I'll keep my word to you as I'll never forget No matter how long it's been how much it's ment To me to know and shared my time with you Not the distance or anything else I could do Could change the fact that you're the first thing I Think of when I wake up in the morning that goodbye Should've took my heart with it has you're the only one I want to be with underneath this burning sun

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