poemranker ::Return from Dubious Mission by Dovina

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Return from Dubious Mission

by Dovina

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Dec 2007 · 3 comments

Wipers clack, midnight past down to forty now Rain collides in gobs Remnants ripped from trees and hopes dash before sad eyes Easier the scream and sway hydroplaning’s threat than silent words stabbing in my ears

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3 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Dec-07/5:49 AM Reply
Garbled nonsense. Throw it in the bin.
[0] Garrett S Sexton 16-Dec-07/11:12 AM Reply
This is SHIT!
[8] deleted user 18-Dec-07/5:37 AM Reply
I like what you've done here Dovina. The only thing that seems off is the word "gobs." Everything else works fine.