poemranker ::plea bargain by malpaso

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Free verse № 154906

plea bargain

Member since 2007 · Posted 16 Feb 2008 · 2 comments

i want to write i want to fill the page with profound imagery deep thoughts but it can't be because i see nothing profound see nothing deep i am the bottom layer the smudge of image-ness grey in the less-ornate frame the Titanic without the flood lights the inner ear staring at the curtain too lazy to think too timid to venture out the crippled recluse oh, fuck me.

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Feb-08/7:41 PM Reply
Quality. I love the line breaks before and after "see nothing deep". How on Earth did you come up with that? Pure instinct I guess...
[7] Prince of Void 22-Mar-08/3:14 PM Reply
I like it with all angles