Moat Man

Member since 2007 · Posted 11 Jun 2008 · 1 comment

Pull the bridge up but let me inside. Don't ever let up just let me inside. I am not safe no, no I am not safe. So lock me up tight sweetheart, let me inside.

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[7] nentwined 26-Jun-08/8:39 PM Reply

this has something, though I think you're going concrete as opposed to free verse? and I'm not really getting the concrete image except for a vague separation of things...