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A rock

Member since 2008 · Posted 24 Jun 2008 · 3 comments

A rock is a rock rough as it seems? is it fragile more than it is does it just disguise the truth or is it its way to make it through? maybe the dolor can explain its acts the one which permeates through its cracks but what's all the fuss about being crude? it just behaves the way it badly should when the group has two camps to belong to just going with the stream of who's who you also can resist if it doesn't make sense but you'd better keep sitting on the fence so maybe that's the reason it looks like that a rock can't be clumsy if it was made of heart

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[2] nentwined 26-Jun-08/8:26 PM Reply

The English of this piece is very awkward. Reads like a school assignment? Not sure you meant dolor or color (though both work about as well?) They end-rhymes (and near rhymes) feel very forced (and AABB tends to jump out as juvenile when reading something).

[5] Skamper 6-Jul-08/4:47 AM Reply

quite riddling - I want to find the trick inside the writing and answer it.

[0] SupremeDreamer 9-Jul-08/10:55 PM Reply

You know what a rock is? really? No, not your sad attempt at philosophising:

A foundation for a great house.
A solid weapon of vengeance.
The character of my penis when Angelina Jolie visits me in my dreams.

A means to pass time by skipping it across bodies of water.

A primate tool to crack hard shells and thus add more protein to it's diet... ultimately leading to larger brain size and walking on two feet, meat consumption and ultimately....

Your shitty attempts at philosophizing. Zero.