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Free verse № 155731

ayow

Member since 2001 · Posted 29 Jul 2008 · 4 comments

i poked my thumb in every block. Though six-sided it held a spot that i could claim. Tied to a die I shamed my name. And every laugh that fell that night was centralized in one delight. The five that failed to fall each throw were deathblows.

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4 comments

[8] Don-Quixote 29-Jul-08/5:07 PM Reply
Shootin craps? Gambling addiction? Hmmm.
[8] T. Jonathron Remp 29-Jul-08/11:37 PM Reply
"was centralized in one delight" = Freudian? LET ME KNOW, K?
[0] Edna Sweetlove 5-Aug-08/8:30 AM Reply
Utter piffle.
[8] INTRANSIT 15-Aug-08/4:59 PM Reply
ska.