poemranker ::enter, do. let up, let loose. by FreeFormFixation

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enter, do. let up, let loose.

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Aug 2008 · 2 comments

Eye like a raisin and hair of a star. Mouth of a maiden that stayed in her car. Arm of an angel and teeth of a fish. Ear of an elephant eating a wish. Foot of the future and hand of the past. Heart of the heavens (all hacked in- to flaps). Meat of the devil and fruit of the vine. One meal so evil it must be divine.

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[8] SupremeDreamer 21-Aug-08/9:08 PM Reply
Clever.. though the elephant bit befuddled me slightly.

Blessed with eight.
[6] half.italian 7-Sep-08/1:09 AM Reply
Hard to follow possibly because of the indentation. I like a lot of the phrases, but I can't follow because of punctuation and spacing.