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Another one for him

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Nov 2008 · 0 comments

Pathetic stumble Flat on my face Shattered pieces Without a trace Memories not faded Vivid, and yet Distance created Eyes still wet Patience, and time Hope this will ease Pain and hurt will soon blow Away with the breeze

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