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Living Hell

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 May 2009 · 0 comments

~There's this thing, that's taken the wheel. ~Has such a tight grip, that it seems unreal. ~Thrown me in shackles, and tied me with a rope. ~Put me down in the dungeon, and diminished all hope. ~How did I get here, way down in this pit. ~Down with the darkness, the evil and shit. ~Will I ever reach the light again, feel the sun on my face? ~Pull myself out of this hell, escape from this place. ~Defeat the dragon, break through the window pane. ~Find myself once again, and get out of the rain. ~But what if it's too strong, much bigger than me. ~What if it's locked me in it's cell, and thrown away the key. ~I pray there's a way, to get away from all this. ~Please Lord help me, it is my only wish. ~Give me the strength that I need, more then ever right now. ~Take me in your arms, and show me how. ~Cause alone I can't do this, I really need your help. ~I'm so lost and terrified, this is the worst I've ever felt. ~Please God I beg you, lead me out of this mess. ~You are my last hope, the only thing I got left. *~*March 25th, 2009*~*

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