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The flute sound makes me blue

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Jan 2009 · 2 comments

The flute sound makes me blue so then My head is down and My soul is down oh god I'm trying so hard to keep the flute sound up for the magic moon in the cloudless heaven and for mysterious lover in the endless silence that they share a bed of the blue I'm really down drifting into the sound landing on the sand stepping in the blue

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[7] Dovina 21-Jan-09/3:57 PM Reply
blue somber flute, bright bird-like flute. I like baroque flute best. breathy and down - flute. nice
[4] nentwined 5-Mar-09/10:21 PM Reply
hmm, no.