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Free verse № 156547

Ode to the Potato

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Mar 2009 · 2 comments

From this plastic dirty heavy bag: mashed, smashed, Lyonnaised, waffled then curly, baked once, twice, stuffed, hash- browned, American fried, French and freedom too, cottaged, souffléd, whipped lightly as it was their fault - buried in coals, en-foiled or bare, its slice raw sparkling wetly a grinding of salt - so hopeful the morning of bacon; a promise of egg, chive or shallot... a brown lumpy ugliness swells shy with eyes and skin, budge buttered truffles what fed my mother's rooted country peel, my father's mess hall contribution, my instant college box of flakes.

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[9] Bill Z Bub 3-Mar-09/5:12 AM Reply
The second stanza is fantastic, "so hopeful the morning of bacon"... indeed it is, indeed it is.
[6] nentwined 5-Mar-09/9:55 PM Reply
If I was hungry to begin with, I was not by the middle of the first stanza... (and, okay, I wasn't quite hungry, but I _had_ been considering dessert).

Second stanza has more promise, imo.