poemranker ::granite hearts by david

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Free verse № 1566

granite hearts

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 3 comments

The benediction lasted until nightfall. the wolves, the deer, and even the crickets (God bless the crickets) would lead their lives; the sound of faucet-flow from the mighty river echoed liberally throughout. (oh how that river flowed) the night was no place or time for us, us with our metal eyes and hearts of stone. we knew too much; we knew not enough. (how we strived to know) lilies with petals like half-moons reflected even a glimmer of love and soul in that benediction night, to even us with our cold steel eyes, our granite hearts.

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[6] nentwined 12-May-02/8:20 PM Reply
sweet, but weird.
[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Jul-03/1:55 PM Reply
Yeah, you're a really good poet. Superb collection really.
[n/a] david › <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Jul-03/2:07 PM Reply
Thank you. Much obliged.